Nina Weatherburn's Suspense Story
Fear That House
Shivering my arm reached out towards the mossy iron gate. As I clutched the handle tightly a trickle of fear ran down my spine. I felt so afraid and longed for her comforting hand to hold. How had it come to this? I had to get inside but how? What if I was seen? I pushed gently on the gate but harder than I should have done. All at once it scraped along the broken cobble path, singing a song of death. I quickly ran through and darted into a bush. Even though everything was silent now, the voice still rang in my head, her voice, I was almost sure it was her voice, but how?
Comments
Well done Nina what a fantastic story and we look forward to the next instalment!
Posted by: Jill, Ken and Finn Weatherburn | November 2, 2007 9:08 PM
Great story Nina!
Posted by: David, Julie, Niamh and Anna | November 15, 2007 1:24 PM
what an excellent beginning to the story, cannot wait for next bit. well done nina! ; )
Posted by: nichola glenn aimee and david | November 19, 2007 8:42 PM
Well done Nina! Great story!
Posted by: Hannah | November 24, 2007 5:22 PM
great story nina it was magnifient well done!!!!
Posted by: chloe hood 3t | April 23, 2008 5:12 PM