Megan Fenwick's Suspense Story
The Haunted House
I stood shaking, staring at that freaky mansion. Should I go in? Yes, my feet were walking all by themselves. I slowly grabbed the iron gate and it screamed at me like Satin's child. Walking up the drive-way I felt like someone was following me. Was that just me? Getting nearer the mansion a smell suddenly hit my nose like a car hitting a small child,it was like an old dead body in a pathology lab. Why was I doing this? He could see me tripping, so why didn't he come and rescue me? Stumbling on the decking, then reaching for the unpainted door handle I.......
Comments
It is so full of suspence and i really enjoyed reading it.Megan is our best friend and i did not suspect anything as good as this!She is obviously going for a very high futer.
Posted by: kate and dan | October 16, 2007 7:48 PM
Brilliant!
Posted by: Rob Fenwick | October 17, 2007 8:48 PM
I want to read more!!
Posted by: Julie Fenwick | October 20, 2007 2:45 PM
this was a fantastic story she worked really hard!!!!
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Posted by: Emily R + Rachel S 6m | January 22, 2008 3:52 PM
i think your story is mint and you should be in the top group well done!!!!
Posted by: elsa | February 14, 2008 6:45 PM
We think this story is mint we really liked it u worked dead hard!!!!!!!
Posted by: elsa+emma | February 26, 2008 7:12 PM