Luke Cuthbertson's Suspense Story
The Night of Death
Getting closer and closer to the huge,peculiar gates. I was scared for myself. What was that feeling? My force from my body pulled me on. I opened the gate praying it wouldn't make a noise. The gate screamed at me like a hurt child.
Death was surrounding me like an army of soldiers. Fear killed my heart. My soul dragged me down, dragged me down. Frozen with fear I bellowed out loud. Blood began to drip from a tree. My hand reached out to pull the handle open,the smell of dead bodies hit my nose . . .
By Luke Cuthbertson

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well done you worked hard
Posted by: A GIRL IN 6M | February 3, 2008 4:34 PM